Review #9

Okay guys :) sorry i havnt gotten the chance to post sooner. : / but hey im postin now arnt i? Okay well the review for today is for a young lady who has been waiting patiently for her review, and i have been meaning to get this up. Alright well here it is, you guys check her out:

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A New Life - Watty Awards 2012 - Setting2012

A New Life
By Ladymess



 Wonderful. Really and its so sweet, its really is good. I enjoyed reading it. Its.. i dunno its just good. its exciting and sweet, and suspencefull (pretend thats a word). I didnt get to read it all at once like i would of liked but i enjoyed it.

 

"My Grandma used to tell me of a land. A land where there were birds and trees. A land where the sky was blue and the sun shone golden in the sky. She told me of green rolling hills and beautiful colourful flowers. She told me of the cities too, with buildings so tall they scraped the sky. She told me of the rain and how it would splash down on the land and make everything smell new and fresh.
But she also told me of the war.

The cold war.

Lilly lives in a desolate world, underground safe from the toxic world above her. But she isn't safe from what lurks in the caves. No one is. But when there's a glimmer of hope and a chance for a happily ever after, will she have what it takes to save herself, her love and possibly the whole human race?"

 

      Well even though im not completely sure of whats up with the ending... (and im not gonna spoil it for you guys) But im pretty sure i figured it out. and if i did thats a sweet ending. Well sorta... Poor Robin (oops) anyways I loved the characters, absolutely fell in love with Robin and Lilly {okay i'll admit it, what i ment was i liked lilly and i fictionally fell in love with Robin XD}. Ladymess has a way with words, shes a tallented writer, and it shows through in A New Life  And Although the diction coulda been more... creative XD the rest was pretty great. i highly sugest you guys check it out! Okay now enough suspence... i give this story a ... wait for it.... hold on.... almost....... HA!! hah just kidding, anyways i give this wattpad book a SEVEN POINT FIVE on the Fight or Flight scale!! WHHOOO!! (everyone applaude). again this is up for the watty awards yall!! so read it, check them out and VOTE VOTE VOTE!! XD

 

Tittle: A New Life

Genre: Watty Awards 2012, Mystery

Okay to Read Rating: PG-13

Wattpad Author:  ladymess

Fight or Flight Scale: 7.5

 

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Well wish i coulda got that to ya sooner yall. Alright ONOSAC update*** i will refrain from posting untill further notice, thank you. (not on here just on my story). ANd.... um well yea XD haha okay well if you would like your story reviewed let me know, you know how to reach me : ) .

 

Thoughtfully yours,

Midnight.

 

 

"Are you Brave enough to face the scale?" She was.









Review #8 (picked the number at random.)

OKay good morning blogers,
i am all over the place today and i would like to get this done so lets get right down to buissness. First of all i am going to apologize strait away. Sorry i havnt been on as much as i would like, sorry about my wack job schedule and i am sorry that i am about to give what will have to pass as this months review. and i am also sorry that im probbably going to have to space these out a little. And i would like to thank ALL of you for being so wonderfull, reading this and being so patient with a crazy person like ME XD okay anywasy down to buissness....


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Rules Were Made to be Broken {Watty Awards 2012}

Rules were made to be broken
by The Great Dance

          Okay well RWMTBB (its shorter to type!!) is a really great storry and i wish i didnt have to put it off and pick it up and put it off and pick it up again. I wish i could of read it with less brakes, but this really was awsome, it was exciting and it had me hooked after i read the description right away. The prologue continued to draw you and the climax was wow. um haha it really is awosme so .. read it! XD

             "This time, they're breaking all the rules.

After a destructive war leaves Eva prisoner for four long years, will freedom really save her or tear her apart? Rescued from her prison by a long lost friend, she must try to rebuild the life she lost. But unwillingly drawn into a battle she left years ago, she must fight to regain the freedom she never truly had.

Love isn't meant to be easy, but for Eva, it may just prove deadly."

          
              Okay well even though she left me on a cliff hanger! ugh cliff hangers... well this is still a great story and there is promise of a second one so thats a good thing... Alright down to buissness. This story was not the original one i was planning to review but its amazing and gifted author TheGreatDance has entered it into the 2012 watty awards. THIS IS THE WATTY AWARDS PEOPLE! WE GOTTA KNOW WHO YOU THING DESERVES TO WIN!! SO READ IT!!! READ! okay now that i got that off my chest, like i was saying...  shes awsome, and i think she has a good chance on winning. :) so please at least check it out. check them all out, but check hers first. NOW, the moment we've all been waiting for.... On the fight of flight scale i give this story a..... Seven. yup you heard me, she got a seven. it was that wonderful. XD

Title:  Rules Were Made to be Broken
Genre: Science Fiction, Wattpad awards 2012
Okay to read rating: PG-13    
Wattpad Author: TheGreatDance
Rate on the Fight or Flight scale: 7

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                Okay you guys. thats all i have time for for today. but really its wonderful. have a nice day and enjoy your readings. Dont forget to read Rules made to be broken, really its great and you can tell that the author was proud of it and has worked hard.
               Thank you for your time, luv yall all. hope to post soon. you know how to get ahold of me

-Midnight.

Wattpad Reviews: Imma start numbering these...

Hey yall,
    
     Okay well, sorry its taken me so long to only get to one review you guys. Im sorry, but ive been busy, adn some family stuff came up. and its just been crazy. Anyway here you go:

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Shattered.

              

                       wow. I loved this, it was like i could do nothing else, see nothing else while i was reading it. The forms in wich it was written is amazin. I bet it took some time to get it that way too. Even though i dont like reviewing poetry, (wich i assure you shares o many elements with this.) it was indeed also a story, and the author has some real talent. It was a story, and a good one at that. The perspectives of a few crazy people... wow. thats awsome, i mean i guess im a sucker for asylummn storys but still. I loved the form, i loved the story line, the syntax, the diction (the word choice was well thoought out), The whole tone was great. However, the different point of views got kinda confusing often. And the fact that everone seemed to love the doctor... eery vibe, XD such malevoilent characters.
               " They had a word for me. They had many.
Crazy.
But here, in this building, it was called something different.
In this asylum, I was nothing.
A number - 33857.
A scream - one of the hundred lingering in the air.
A schizophrenic.

A mental asylum. A patient. A story, told through several eyes...
"Some demons never die..."


You cannot run from the mirror, even if it is shattered. Deafness is a distant dream, all she heard is screams. She will finish them all, one by one. Until nothing remains, not even the fragments of the mirror "

                            Okay well i couldnt pull away from this while i was reading it. but i had to stop for some reason, and when i tried to pick it back up... i couldnt. i just couldnt do it. it was good as long as i was reading it imediatly but... i couldnt pick it back up.And i think that is an important quality to have. UM... wow well the author gunsandguitars is a verry tallented author and i am impressed. I'm getting right to the point: on the FIGHT OR FLIGHT scale, its a seven.

                   

 

Tittle: Shattered

Genre: Short story, thriller

Okay to read Rating: PG-13

Wattpad Author: gunsandguitars

Rate on the Fight or Flight Scale: 7

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I am doing the best i can alright? I hope thats understood. now on the count that i couldnt get a whole storry read i apologize i will work on that. So if you guys have suggestions or would like to enter ur (perferably finished) story i thank you and i will try to get that done.

-LadyMidnightSun

p.s. FLight... wow you guys if you like flight Im working on getting its sequal in tact. so bare with me.

 



Chyna Express: Flight by Ladymidnightsun XD

Chyna Express: Flight by Ladymidnightsun: Flight by Ladymidnightsun Alright! Haven't posted in the longest time. But still know the ropes. Only problem is going to not want to us...


Oh my goodness!!! you guys okay first of all this is "Fight or Flight" thi would be the Flight part Oh gosh, im soo... wow gratitude going out to my amazing fan, seriously she has just been so suportive and stuff... wow... GingeyAsian, shes amazing, this is her review thing i supose but ... wow READ THIS CLICK THE LINK, such an amazing person, wonderfull. She had her own opinion to share about flight and im just... astonished. really oh my god this is great, wow. XD i was hapy any way from my day but now... now im GLOWING, oh gosh. YOU GUYS GO FAN HER XD VOTE FOR ON OF HER AWSOME WORKS, READ HER REVIEW TOO, SERIOUSLY C(: DO SOMTHING!! oh gosh im... wow. words cant describe, it.

Life

Okay you guys,
      

                I'm tryin to get this done, i know i owe yall some reviews!!! i havnt forgotten, but now i gotta balance skewl, and all its wonders (sarcasm) i gotta spend some time with my peoples, who swear i neglect them... so not true. And i gotta work on flight, and i gotta read some non wattpad things. i gotta finish up my odd jobs, and i gotta try to settle back into my evil routine that revolves around all that is highschool -.- Yay! (sarcasm) grrrr i soooo dont wanna do that! i wanna talk to you guys on here and pretend i dont have a life, adn read wattpad, get my reviews down, write OTOSAC, really XD somtimes you guys make my day!! XD Its wonderfull. Somtimes i get on the computer adn i see a message adn i find out its from one of you and im practically glowing in the dark. wonderfull. really wonderfull.
              Well, i guess i should say somthing review related :D um.... hmmm kay i have picked the three reviews im working on now. And im warning you, thier.... wow. XD thier interesting so far. ive dotn the first one and you will recieve word of them when i get to that. Um... Yup thats review related. hmmm...

Somtimes people dont understand

exactly what they have at hand

sometimes the tears come first

but only in there little bursts

i can only hide from whats out there

but myself is always in despair

becuase in the shadows, darkness lies

upon what the light should show

only through caring eyes.

XD now you guys have read interesting poetry!! O.o or it was terrible and you hatted it. O.O or you skipped it entirly... in which case.... ouch XD haha just kidding some people dont like that sort of thing, so i could understand skipping it. hm.... Okay you guys i have said stuff and i talk and i try to joke around but seriously what do you think of this review blog, i mean obviously since ur reading this you know it excists but... How many of you would like for it to continue, and like if you do like this, then what about a contest... Yes. A contest, whould any of you enjoy a contest? and if so what kind? Well if you have imput then please scroll down untill you see my "important links" if not... well then do what you intended to do C( :  Okay i've consumed enough of our time. I gotta mess with homework and you have to get on with ur lives XD have an awsome day.

-Midnight

P.S. Dont forget to read the take flight series on wattpad.

"Are you Brave enough to face the Scale?"

**Review from wattpad** ^_^ Wonderfull

Dear Bloggers,

           Its me again!! its time for some more reviews!!! Okay so someone actually reads this thing XD really, I know becuase she suggested a coulple storys for me to review shes wonderfull so everyone give a round of applase for the wonderfull "coloringwalls" So you guys go fan her for being so wonderfull!!! *Everyone claps* Okay so anyways, Moving on... Hmm well then on with the reviews!!!  ^_^

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Late Summer Rain

         OKay Late Summer Rain its a wonderfull story, im glad it was suggested otherwise i probbly wouldnt of come across it. Um specifically i liked the symbolism and the air the author just conveyed it was great. It had alot of emotion thrown in it too. However i wish it had a little more detail in the begining, it was still awsome. Okay you guys fine, i will admit it, it brought tears to my eyes, big bad midnight isnt so big or bad. {But of course you couldnt tell with all the colors i use in this blog right? ; ) } So that should give ya some ideas of how good this is, cuz seriously its not too easy for there to even be a threat of tears. sometimes its so loving, then its so heartbreaking. Serisouly read it. XD

     "It was pity that first made Dannie speak to him. She had known Ryan since she was a kid, but he had always been the popular Golden Boy, and she had always been the tomboy that didn’t mind not having any friends. It was odd, she had thought, that all the popular kids who had once kissed the ground he walked on, didn’t so much spared him a glance anymore, and it was this that made her sit with him that one faithful day and begin something that would only end up causing her pain."

        Alright remember this wonderfull story was suggested by one of its wonderfull fans. OKay well like i said earlier it brought tears to my eyes. The characters touched me, they did, it wasnt too strong of a touch but they did, strong emotion. There were seconds in this short story i laughed and a then there were some where i almost cried. Its wonderfull, it wasnt one where you know, i automattically like got Story addicted to it, but still somtiems those could be a pain. It really is good, i loved the symbolism in it, and i could just sence the foreshadowing. Anyhow AubreyEatsHearts is a wonderfull author you guys!! she has lots of storys with big rating on wattpad, not just this one. and aubrey you have awsome fans! one in particular, she suggested this story. Now, i bet your all wanting to know what i rate this one right? well im not gonna tell you.... XD just kidding okay so, *serious face* For the reasons i have told you and the feeling i've got in my gut, i will tell you. DRUM ROLL PLEASE!! On the Fight or Flight scale i give it.... A Six pont Five!! And the crowd goes wild!! :D okay really this is wonderfull check it out guys, i bet the majority of you will love it.

Tittle: Late Summer Rain

Genre: Short story, Romance

Okay to read Rating: PG

Wattpad Author: AubreyEatsHearts

Rate on the Fight or Flight Scale: 6.5

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         OKay you guys, i originally planed on waiting untill i read and have done three of theses, but i got a little too excited ^_^ so you guys, you know just go with it. But Really this one was suggested to be read by one of its fans, shes awsome and pretty nice so yall go fan her. if you dont... well i'll let that threat linger (ignore the fact that its an empty one, so i can pretend im scary C( : ). she's coloringwalls. So check her out and fan her, and if any creeps are reading this, i sugest you behave your selves or else. And that is NOT an empty threat -.- i dont like and i wont tolerate harrassment from anyone to anyone. understood? good glad we got that out of the way.

        Anyways :D i gotta tell ya somthing crazy that happened the other day because... well i dunno i just want to. ***Alright imagine this: I was sitting at the lunch table with my Guy, the table was full with both my friends and his. Two of my friends are perverted jerks somtimes but you know, how many guys arnt? Anyways so we're all relaxed adn hanging out. My guy has his arm around me. When Charly (im not giving you guys real names, cuz that would be crazy.) stands up and says "hey anhelica (thats my name) -insert peverted joke here- Ussually i'd shake my head and kind of laugh becuase he was just that kind of friend. But i snaped. I jumped up and threw my water bottle at him, i missed him and im pretty sure i didnt hit anyone else, but everyone else at the table jumped fifty feet in the air adn almost had a heart attack. Well all but one C( : Carley -my best friend- was still siting calmly at the table. as if this sort of thing happened everyday. XD i felt so bad afterwards i was all mad and it was funny how fast charley booked it out of there XD but then i felt bad and apologized. but still. Carley XD. all calm***  Anyways now you know a fact of my boring life that you probly dont care about C(:

         Well about flight 2 i will post twice friday for any of you who read it. Now anyways, thanks for reading this and have a nice day.

           - Midnight

P.S. YOU GUYS BE AWSOME LIKE coloringwalls AND SUGGEST A BOOK TO REVIEW!! WETHER ITS YOURS OR YOUR FACORITE AUTHOR ON WATTPAD.

"Are you Brave enough to face the scale?"



Aditional information about wattpad reviews

           HEY! Afternoon Bloggers,


                  OKay guys there are a few aditional things i wanteed to say. First of all, i would perfer to only do reviews on the finished Storys, And Poetry... Well, guys poems.. i dont like reviewing poetry maybe somwhere in the future but not right now  becuase a poem is a personal thing, Poetry is YOU thats just how it is. And right now i would feel as if i was being unfair or whatever, becuase iwould personally feel like i was judging you or somthing and i just dont feel comfortable with that.  OKay well i just thouht i'd point that out before i did much else.

IF YOU WOULD LIKE YOURE STORY ON WATTPAD TO BE REVIEWED, OR SAW A SORRY YOU WOULD LIKE REVIEWED, THEN PLEASE CONTACT ME ON WATTPAD!!!

Importantish Links:

• http://www.wattpad.com/user/ladymidnightsun   This is how you can reach me on wattpad.
• Fallenangelfeather@hotmail.com     This is where you ca reach me if your NOT a wattpad user, but would like to say somthing. *** I do not tolerate harrassment just so you know***
• http://www.wattpad.com/story/1212094-flight   This is Flights page to read it, just in caase any of you would like to read it XD cuz u decide ur awmazing ^_^
• http://www.facebook.com/?sk=welcome#!/   This is my reachable facebook so you can friend me and talk about my reviews be friends, and or talk wattpad.
• http://www.facebook.com/?sk=welcome#!/pages/Flight/338185942918317  Flights FB page, just cuz

OKay well i aint got anything else but this is virtually how you would be able to get a hold of me, so you guys have no excuse XD haha well thanks gusy for paying this much attention, and let me know. Oh and it may take me a few days to read ur story but it WILL get read.

-Midnight

(Ladymidnightsun) (AV)

P.S. i try to keep my profile pics ths same so ouknow its me 

**Information about wattpad Reviews**

Good Morning,

          Okay about those reviews : ). Daisychain has been kind enough to spread word of this, adn i would like to get out some of what she suggested and also let you guys who want to be reivewed know whats going on.

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        Okay, the first thing i do when i am reviewing somthing is of course, list the tittle. Then i go i think i will go in and talk about what i specifically liked, and (or) didnt like about the story. Sometimes even give advice, on things the authores might want to improve on, just some suggestions. And i might have extra things to say, in wich case i'll say them.
        Next what i'll do is in Quotation marks i will put the description that the author has choses to write.
       After i have done those things, then i might say a few things about my expeirance reading it, and then i will mention the author, mayber say a few things about him or her. And then i will rate the story on a scale from ONE to TEN. Its called the Fight or Flight scale. And i am going to tell you now, the ratting i give is MY OPINION. for whatever reason, that i will hopfully explain before i give the ratting. If, by chance, i give someone else either a higher or lower ratting, it dosnt mean anyone is better than anyone else. I am ratting storys, not the people who write them.

Lastly, i will post somthing that looks simualar to this:

Title: 
Genre:
Okay to read rating:
Wattpad Author:
Rate on the Fight or Flight scale:

I will fill it out and conclude my review.

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That is how i will conduct my reviews thank you ^_^ if you would like me to review your story then please notify me by Wattpad. I will be sure to get it done. Thank you preciate it, and i'm happy to do so. Have a nice day, and dont forget to... haha oops i forgot XD. See ya!

- Midnight

P.S.  ooh haha i almost forgot this too, flight fans i will be posting on fridays when i can but not this friday in honor of shark week. Thank you : D 

*** Wattpad Reviews ***

 Good afternoon Everyone,
     www.wattpad.com  is a website that has to do with reading. (duh) haha um i spend sixty percent of my time on this website. i love to read, i do. i would rather be reading than almost anything else. THe only thing i probably love more than reading would be writing XD tahts just how it is. okay anyway back to buisness. : ] <---- serious face haha Anyway.  By the way i supose you have to know how i rate things... well just know i am a tremendously harsh rater. I dont just give out my ratings : that would be cheating.

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Love is Blind

OKay love is blind is a love story you guys, but its a wonderful one. This one really oughta be published and come out in book form!! serisously i loved it. Fell in love with the meaning becuase some of it hits close to home. Fell in love with the characters too! i absolutely love them. This is about not treating people with disabilitys differently. thier not freaks, they dont belong in a zoo, and thier not completely helpless. THier just like you or me... wonderful story.
     "After losing her parents in a drunk driving accident, Hailey Baker moves in with her wealthy and eccentric uncle. After seven months of recovery, she still has trouble with her back and is sometimes confined to a wheelchair. But she is determined to live a normal life. When she starts at a new school, she meets Blake Adams. He's surly, grumpy, and gorgeous. He's also legally blind. Together, the two of them learn that while love is blind, it can also be a powerful healer."
  Before you ask yes she is working on a sequal, it is called love is silent. and i will have a review on it as soon as i get to it. The author of Love is Blind, is known on wattpad as XxBlondie99xX, she is a wonderfull author, I give love is blind on the scale of one to ten ..... An Eight!!!

Title: Love is Blind
Genre: Romance, Teen Fiction
Okay to read rating: PG-13
Wattpad Author: XxBlondie99xX
Rate on the Fight or Flight scale: 8

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 A Pirates Kiss

Ah, A Pirates Kiss...  Its so exciting i got wraped into it the first time i read it. It is a Watty Award winner as it should be, its tremendous and im so glad i read it. The characters... wow i loved them fell in love with them i gained two new book crushes while reading this! its wonderfull. Being the daughter of the duke, only to get stolen away by the pirates! XD oh its wonderfull! haha its so adventureous, seriously read it its GREAT. : D 

 

     "It is Dangerous to deal with Pirates.
Circe's Father has always told her so. So when a mysterious shadowy figure with gold and silver eyes appears on her balcony and attemptes to steal her away the first thing that she wonders is why? Why does her Father pity Pirates? Why does he never talk about her Mother? Why does he never talk to her?
Two years will go by before she finds the answers she is looking for,by then Circe is certain that the Pirate willhave forgotten all about her and the promise he made and sealed, with a stolen kiss.
Unfortunatly there is still one other thing she needs to learn.
A Pirate never forgets.

Winner of the Adventure category and Best Hero in the Watty Awards 2011.
All Rights Reserved "

Again there is a sequal to this!! i have yet to read it... :./ haha XD but i WILL and i will do my best to get that reviwe to you too. its called A Pirates Kiss: Sunken Treasures and im telling you, you will be hanging off every word its that great. Plus if you imagine Johny depp and his performances while reading, its all that much more wonderfull XD haha okay anyways back to buissness. The author of A Pirates Kiss is none other than iluvdaisychain, great author. I give A Pirates Kiss an Eight point Five. Yes you heard me. it wasnt a nine, but it wasnt a eight. so somwhere in the middle, so i dubb this an eight point five.


Title: A Pirates Kiss
Genre:Adventure
Okay to read rating: PG-13
Wattpad Author: iluvdaisychain
Rate on the Fight or Flight scale: 8.5

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Bruises and scars. (Teacher/student love story)

I have read this alot, its been awhile since i have read it, but i have, i've read it twice, its a great storry. i love it. Um... The characters are wonderfull and the plot is good too. Its also a love story, its a good love story, and for the record, (my record) Abuse is not okay, NOt emotional abuse, not physical. there is a serious problem with domestic violence. And its just not okay. Anyways. read this it reall is good.

     "Scarlete Jones is dating the schools biggest football star; Alex Stein. He has the whole school wrapped around his finger. But what happens when he becomes abusive? What happens when it turns out the only person who can save her is her new hot teacher; Holden Blake?"

There is no sequal to this, it pretty much speaks for its self, the author of this is Emofly39 , great author, wonderfull. I have to say i looked and looked for this on wattpad, i finally found it and i read it for the second time. its wonderfull. Be sure to have a look. My rating on the fight or flight scale would be..... A Seven.

Title: Bruises and Scars (teacher/student love story)

Genre:Romance, Teen Fiction

Okay to read rating: R

Wattpad Author: Emofly39

Rate on the Fight or Flight scale: 7

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Well you guys XD thats three. i think that will sufice for the day. haha :) im glad you could read this. THey really are good. UM... adn dont worry i wont just give good reviews, im just trying to get out my opinion. WHich reminds me. JUST BECUASE I GAVE SOMEONE A BETTER RATTING THAT SOMEONE ELSE DOSNT MEAN ANYTHING. IM RATING STORYS NOT PEOPLE. NO ONE IS BETTER THAN ANYONE ELSE. good im glad i got that out ther.

       Anyhow im glad i got that out there and everyone knows about these storys now. : D hmm... oh yes and i have to mention flight. Remember Flight has  a sequal, its called On the Other Side and Caged, hope you get a chance to get a look at it. hmmm... Oh and i wont just be talking bout wattpad storys, i read the other kind too!!! matter of fact i think thats what my next post will be about... hmmm XD haha anyways have a good day. Thanks for reading.

Sincerly yours, Midnight

WHOO first post EVER!!

     HaHa - okay you guys. First of all i am new at this so cut me some slack second of all. im not compleetely sure why i decided to do this, but half of it is for Flight. Flight is my book that i just enjoy righting. My characters came to be known as my family in a wierd they dont excist in anything but my head kinda way XD and yea im crazy. sometimes.  hmm what else should you know... OH yea im not allways this... peppy. sometimes im depressing somtimes i feel awsome and some.. well im here XD okay what else.. Oh yes almost forgot. My name. I have alot of names, One that im known for my writing (i mean the take flight series.) is LadyMid Nightsun (Witch i am nicknamed Midnight). im on facebook. Um... ooh my poetry thats under my real name and such...
     Alright i love wattpad so im gonna be saying what i think are good reads on there. and of course you guys will be hearing about flight. So here we go. from here on out we start our fabulous new adventure with words! XD oh and i like pictures so you'll be seein those too.
   And so you dont get confused later my main Flight characters are mason and RAven. thinking about making Raven a blog... hmmm tell me what you think about this Idea. Any ways PEACE XD

- Midnight