Okay well, sorry its taken me so long to only get to one review you guys. Im sorry, but ive been busy, adn some family stuff came up. and its just been crazy. Anyway here you go:
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Shattered.
wow. I loved this, it was like i could do nothing else, see nothing else while i was reading it. The forms in wich it was written is amazin. I bet it took some time to get it that way too. Even though i dont like reviewing poetry, (wich i assure you shares o many elements with this.) it was indeed also a story, and the author has some real talent. It was a story, and a good one at that. The perspectives of a few crazy people... wow. thats awsome, i mean i guess im a sucker for asylummn storys but still. I loved the form, i loved the story line, the syntax, the diction (the word choice was well thoought out), The whole tone was great. However, the different point of views got kinda confusing often. And the fact that everone seemed to love the doctor... eery vibe, XD such malevoilent characters.
" They had a word for me. They had many.
Crazy.
But here, in this building, it was called something different.
In this asylum, I was nothing.
A number - 33857.
A scream - one of the hundred lingering in the air.
A schizophrenic.
A mental asylum. A patient. A story, told through several eyes...
"Some demons never die..."
You cannot run from the mirror, even if it is shattered. Deafness is a distant dream, all she heard is screams. She will finish them all, one by one. Until nothing remains, not even the fragments of the mirror "
Okay well i couldnt pull away from this while i was reading it. but i had to stop for some reason, and when i tried to pick it back up... i couldnt. i just couldnt do it. it was good as long as i was reading it imediatly but... i couldnt pick it back up.And i think that is an important quality to have. UM... wow well the author gunsandguitars is a verry tallented author and i am impressed. I'm getting right to the point: on the FIGHT OR FLIGHT scale, its a seven.
" They had a word for me. They had many.
Crazy.
But here, in this building, it was called something different.
In this asylum, I was nothing.
A number - 33857.
A scream - one of the hundred lingering in the air.
A schizophrenic.
A mental asylum. A patient. A story, told through several eyes...
"Some demons never die..."
You cannot run from the mirror, even if it is shattered. Deafness is a distant dream, all she heard is screams. She will finish them all, one by one. Until nothing remains, not even the fragments of the mirror "
Okay well i couldnt pull away from this while i was reading it. but i had to stop for some reason, and when i tried to pick it back up... i couldnt. i just couldnt do it. it was good as long as i was reading it imediatly but... i couldnt pick it back up.And i think that is an important quality to have. UM... wow well the author gunsandguitars is a verry tallented author and i am impressed. I'm getting right to the point: on the FIGHT OR FLIGHT scale, its a seven.
Tittle: Shattered
Genre: Short story, thriller
Okay to read Rating: PG-13
Wattpad Author: gunsandguitars
Rate on the Fight or Flight Scale: 7
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I am doing the best i can alright? I hope thats understood. now on the count that i couldnt get a whole storry read i apologize i will work on that. So if you guys have suggestions or would like to enter ur (perferably finished) story i thank you and i will try to get that done.
-LadyMidnightSun
p.s. FLight... wow you guys if you like flight Im working on getting its sequal in tact. so bare with me.
I am doing the best i can alright? I hope thats understood. now on the count that i couldnt get a whole storry read i apologize i will work on that. So if you guys have suggestions or would like to enter ur (perferably finished) story i thank you and i will try to get that done.
-LadyMidnightSun
p.s. FLight... wow you guys if you like flight Im working on getting its sequal in tact. so bare with me.
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