Review # 12

Good morning guys. I'm trying to do these reviews more often, because these authors deserve more reads and you readers deserve more reads written by good authors. So here ya go! ... wait wait stop.. okay one announcement first. I have finished the second book in the Take flight series. On The Other Side and Caged is finished. So go ahead and  check that out if ya want. But if you do don't forget to comment! I would love to hear YOUR reviews. XD Anyway back to buissness.

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My Wattpad Love

My Wattpad Love
by, cold_lady 19

 

 

This was great, it really was. It was amazing it took my breathe away. I was tempted to give it a ten and call it good. deeming it the best I have ever read on wattpad. However that's not exactly true. But in all it got its fair rating. After all it was in the watty awards. And it was a very well deserved nomination.

 

 

"Julie has always been the shy type. Her world changes when she finds wattpad, a very popular ebook community. She becomes addicted to it and even starts posting her own stories. But are friends, fans and votes all she will get from this site? Or is it possible to find love as well?"

 

Okay wow. Before I say anything about this story let me just say something... I believe a big portion of a good book, is the characters. The audience has to - in some way shape or form - create a bond between that person and the characters. And I have to say My Wattpad Love did exactly that. I try  to really point out the characters in a book. Not because I think they just have cool names or whatever, but because they are/ were important. And you know something? I loved these characters. I loved their personality's. I loved their opinions. I loved the sane, the crazy. It was great. This story was amazing, it really was. I didn't have to guess at most the words, the grammar was great. The plot was - interesting. Its not everyday you read about this sort of thing is it? It was original. And it was so out of the blue that it was obvious. In this story I laughed, I felt bad for them, I felt like yelling at the characters, I felt like (if they weren't fictional and standing in my living room) hitting them upside the head at times. I really bonded with them, and to be honest I think everyone who has read it has bonded with them. Everyone has been in one of their situations or has that one friend with that personality. It was just so - relatable. It was a good read. And the story behind Evan - that was great, well not for Evan but it was good conflict. This was a wonderful write. And like Some of the friends here, Shane for instance, starting out you look at him in one light, and not long after, your wondering in parts of the book hmm... where is Shane? Why because you bonded with him. You bond with everyone and it just give that feel that your there. This book is unpredictable and it keeps you on your fictional toes. That is why I have finally come to a descition about the rating. I have decided that it dosnt exactly reach my standards for a Ten, However - considering the dialogue, the grammar, the plot and the amazing climax. Im giving it, on the Fight or Flight scale.....  a 8.4.  It was written by a great author. Everyone give her a round of applause and read it for yourselves. Who knows, maybe it will be your wattpad love.  ;)

 

 

Tittle: My Wattpad Love

Genre: Teen Fiction, Watty Awards 2012

Okay to read rating PG-13

Wattpad Author: cool_lady 19

Fight or Flight Scale: 8.4

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Alright that just about wraps things up today. I just wanted to say, if you havnt already checked out wattpad, then go do so! Its awesome guys and besides, theres a key word to its stories they are Free.  Yes let me say that again, UH HEM, They stories on wattpad are free. A membership is free. Sooo- there you have it. Go take a look. Pic a story and prepare to be addicted. XD you guys are awesome. Love ya. Good night.

 

Happily yours,

Midnight





Review #10 & 11

Wow you guys, I haven't written in so long :O I cant believe life had me this busy!!! I love writing here with you guys. Okay so .... I'm doing two reviews to day!! dose that make up for my leave of absence?? One of them is sort of a bribe... She hasn't finished yet...  AND I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! but anyway... the other is an amazing story. I really didn't think I would like it but then I got hooked on it and actually its unbelievably original.... Alright lets get started shall we?
 
p.s incase you do not notice they both have something in common today.
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Pregnant With My Mate's Baby, Too Bad I was Rejected

 

Pregnant With My Mates' baby To Bad I Was Rejected
by, CriesOfStar

    Every one who reads Fight or Flight knows that I do not like doing reviews on stories that have yet to be completed. Why? Because it could be good right now, I could give it a wonderful rating then it would all go down hill and it would no longer be accurate. However. This is an amazing story so far. I'm anxious to see what happens next and I really enjoy this story. The author CriesOfStar has a real gift for drama, she is a good writer. Even though she's young (sorta really young) shes still talented.
   
            "Star Smith was your smart, witty, anti-parting, type of girl. She enjoyed long walks in the forest and playing COD (Call Of Duty) with the boys in her pack. She was a tom boy who was friends with a girl who was the total opposite of her, Stacy.

Stacy being the Party Girly girl she was dragged Star to a 21 and up party for the celebration of there Alpha's upcoming party and things get a bit too wild when She meets bad boy Alpha Luke.

Pregnant, scared, and ashamed of her actions. Star leaves her small town isolation only to come back later with a small, but cute gift..... "


       Well this has -so far- a cute plot. It really dose. There is a lot of Drama. I love the characters. I seriously do. There is great conflict and the right amount of flare. It needs some work though im not going to lie, its got a couple rough edges. But I really do love the characters and as for the current and last chapter written so far. WOW. yea I hope that works out. this is a great read though. And I encourage everyone to start reading it and to encourage the author CriesOfStar to not give up and keep it up. shes' gifted, she is. with a little work she could very well be a published author. She really could.  And as for this stories rating... well...  You can tell it has had effort put into it. It really dose have a nice plot. Nice consistency with the characters.The title is a mouthful, but it just draws you in. Good story in all really, Except it isn't finished yet, and parts of it is a little unpredictable, with short chapters, however it is a FICTION novel. I give Pregnant With My Mate's Baby, Too Bad I was Rejected a six. So to be honest this is a wonderful review it is receiving. Especially since its not 6 out of 10 is nothing to sneeze at. Especially since no one has really ever gotten a ten here. Still waiting for that one story to blow me away. Who knows this isn't finished yet its currently has only 13 chapters, The review could change. But for now...

Tittle: Pregnant with My Mate's baby, Too Bad I Was Rejected

Genre: Teen Fiction, Werewolf

Okay to Read Rating: PG-13

Wattpad Author:  CriesOfStar

Fight or Flight Scale: 6

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My Muted Mate

 

 

My Muted Mate

By, Maroon1479

 



 

Alright lets get strait down to buissness. I better keep this short and sweet because if I don't imma give it away. This was fantastic. It was Im going to rate this right now and tell why in a minute. Its an 8. This is a perfect example of merging two worlds. Two so different worlds and writing them in such a way as to bringing normalness to the senses.

"RUSSO'S BOOK ONE!

Abigail has a secret; her mother an alcoholic and her father beats her. For the cost, her baby brother wont get beat like she does if she does whatever her father say. Either it's to cook, clean, steal, do horrible in school, or not talking.

Abigail doesn’t have any friend and she doesn’t talk. Not because she can’t, but because she’s not aloud. She can’t speak a word about what happens at home and really, she doesn’t want to talk. She doesn’t want to get close to anyone because she scared for them.

Abigail had to move because her father lost his job and the only work he can find is out of town. He doesn’t like to stay in the same town after loosing a job. He finds it humiliating.

On Abigail first day at a new school, a certain boy seems to be interested in her. Abigail doesn’t know why since they’re nothing about her that’s interesting about her.

Scott was like every other guy—aside from being a werewolf. His whole family are werewolves. He feels so out of place though because most of his family members are already mated at the age of fourteen, but he’s sixteen and mate-less.

Scott is popular. He’s a good boy; he gets straight A’s, plays for football, loved by everyone, care-free, and loving.

When new girl, Abigail show up, he’s wonder struck. He knew he found her since he has felt something he never felt before with a girl before.

But when she doesn’t talk to him, he’s worried she might be deaf, muted, or worse—not like him. "


This story is not as cheesy as it sounds its amazing. I was shocked when I read this and it just kept things straight. I love Abby. I do shes such a strong character and Scott just keeps her on her toes & vice verca. Great way to just keep the world of fiction in balance this was an amazing story. great grammar. great diction. Wonderful characters, the plot is -wow. It just really struck me as amazing. It did. I'm giving this story an 8 and and I sugest it to anyone who loves this stuff. Not to mention the great stand it has against domestic violence. This is great it truly is. And I am really taking off my hat to the author.

Tittle: My Muted Mate

Genre: Werewolf

Okay to Read Rating: PG-13

Wattpad Author:  Maroon1479

Fight or Flight Scale: 8

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Alright that wraps those up you guys. They are both truly amazing I encourage you to read both of them. remember this is my opinion. You guys be your own judges. Okay then what am I forgetting...

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OOOH yea!! Take flight series... My work is well... OTOSAC is almost finished. I wanted to update on here before I completely tied up those loose ends.... its coming along. Just reminding you guys. LOVE YA!!

If you would like your story reviewed let me know, seriously, I love this. you know how to reach me : ) .

 

Thoughtfully yours,

Midnight.

 

 

"Are you Brave enough to face the scale?" They were.