p.s incase you do not notice they both have something in common today.
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Pregnant With My Mate's Baby, Too Bad I was Rejected
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| Pregnant With My Mates' baby To Bad I Was Rejected by, CriesOfStar |
"Star Smith was your smart, witty, anti-parting, type of girl. She enjoyed long walks in the forest and playing COD (Call Of Duty) with the boys in her pack. She was a tom boy who was friends with a girl who was the total opposite of her, Stacy.
Stacy being the Party Girly girl she was dragged Star to a 21 and up party for the celebration of there Alpha's upcoming party and things get a bit too wild when She meets bad boy Alpha Luke.
Pregnant, scared, and ashamed of her actions. Star leaves her small town isolation only to come back later with a small, but cute gift..... "
Well this has -so far- a cute plot. It really dose. There is a lot of Drama. I love the characters. I seriously do. There is great conflict and the right amount of flare. It needs some work though im not going to lie, its got a couple rough edges. But I really do love the characters and as for the current and last chapter written so far. WOW. yea I hope that works out. this is a great read though. And I encourage everyone to start reading it and to encourage the author CriesOfStar to not give up and keep it up. shes' gifted, she is. with a little work she could very well be a published author. She really could. And as for this stories rating... well... You can tell it has had effort put into it. It really dose have a nice plot. Nice consistency with the characters.The title is a mouthful, but it just draws you in. Good story in all really, Except it isn't finished yet, and parts of it is a little unpredictable, with short chapters, however it is a FICTION novel. I give Pregnant With My Mate's Baby, Too Bad I was Rejected a six. So to be honest this is a wonderful review it is receiving. Especially since its not 6 out of 10 is nothing to sneeze at. Especially since no one has really ever gotten a ten here. Still waiting for that one story to blow me away. Who knows this isn't finished yet its currently has only 13 chapters, The review could change. But for now...
Tittle: Pregnant with My Mate's baby, Too Bad I Was Rejected
Genre: Teen Fiction, Werewolf
Okay to Read Rating: PG-13
Wattpad Author: CriesOfStar
Fight or Flight Scale: 6
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My Muted Mate
My Muted Mate
By, Maroon1479
"RUSSO'S BOOK ONE!
Abigail has a secret; her mother an alcoholic and her father beats her. For the cost, her baby brother wont get beat like she does if she does whatever her father say. Either it's to cook, clean, steal, do horrible in school, or not talking.
Abigail doesn’t have any friend and she doesn’t talk. Not because she can’t, but because she’s not aloud. She can’t speak a word about what happens at home and really, she doesn’t want to talk. She doesn’t want to get close to anyone because she scared for them.
Abigail had to move because her father lost his job and the only work he can find is out of town. He doesn’t like to stay in the same town after loosing a job. He finds it humiliating.
On Abigail first day at a new school, a certain boy seems to be interested in her. Abigail doesn’t know why since they’re nothing about her that’s interesting about her.
Scott was like every other guy—aside from being a werewolf. His whole family are werewolves. He feels so out of place though because most of his family members are already mated at the age of fourteen, but he’s sixteen and mate-less.
Scott is popular. He’s a good boy; he gets straight A’s, plays for football, loved by everyone, care-free, and loving.
When new girl, Abigail show up, he’s wonder struck. He knew he found her since he has felt something he never felt before with a girl before.
But when she doesn’t talk to him, he’s worried she might be deaf, muted, or worse—not like him. "
This story is not as cheesy as it sounds its amazing. I was shocked when I read this and it just kept things straight. I love Abby. I do shes such a strong character and Scott just keeps her on her toes & vice verca. Great way to just keep the world of fiction in balance this was an amazing story. great grammar. great diction. Wonderful characters, the plot is -wow. It just really struck me as amazing. It did. I'm giving this story an 8 and and I sugest it to anyone who loves this stuff. Not to mention the great stand it has against domestic violence. This is great it truly is. And I am really taking off my hat to the author.
Tittle: My Muted Mate
Genre: Werewolf
Okay to Read Rating: PG-13
Wattpad Author: Maroon1479
Fight or Flight Scale: 8
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Alright that wraps those up you guys. They are both truly amazing I encourage you to read both of them. remember this is my opinion. You guys be your own judges. Okay then what am I forgetting...
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OOOH yea!! Take flight series... My work is well... OTOSAC is almost finished. I wanted to update on here before I completely tied up those loose ends.... its coming along. Just reminding you guys. LOVE YA!!
If you would like your story reviewed let me know, seriously, I love this. you know how to reach me : ) .
Thoughtfully yours,
Midnight.
"Are you Brave enough to face the scale?" They were.
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