Review # 12

Good morning guys. I'm trying to do these reviews more often, because these authors deserve more reads and you readers deserve more reads written by good authors. So here ya go! ... wait wait stop.. okay one announcement first. I have finished the second book in the Take flight series. On The Other Side and Caged is finished. So go ahead and  check that out if ya want. But if you do don't forget to comment! I would love to hear YOUR reviews. XD Anyway back to buissness.

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My Wattpad Love

My Wattpad Love
by, cold_lady 19

 

 

This was great, it really was. It was amazing it took my breathe away. I was tempted to give it a ten and call it good. deeming it the best I have ever read on wattpad. However that's not exactly true. But in all it got its fair rating. After all it was in the watty awards. And it was a very well deserved nomination.

 

 

"Julie has always been the shy type. Her world changes when she finds wattpad, a very popular ebook community. She becomes addicted to it and even starts posting her own stories. But are friends, fans and votes all she will get from this site? Or is it possible to find love as well?"

 

Okay wow. Before I say anything about this story let me just say something... I believe a big portion of a good book, is the characters. The audience has to - in some way shape or form - create a bond between that person and the characters. And I have to say My Wattpad Love did exactly that. I try  to really point out the characters in a book. Not because I think they just have cool names or whatever, but because they are/ were important. And you know something? I loved these characters. I loved their personality's. I loved their opinions. I loved the sane, the crazy. It was great. This story was amazing, it really was. I didn't have to guess at most the words, the grammar was great. The plot was - interesting. Its not everyday you read about this sort of thing is it? It was original. And it was so out of the blue that it was obvious. In this story I laughed, I felt bad for them, I felt like yelling at the characters, I felt like (if they weren't fictional and standing in my living room) hitting them upside the head at times. I really bonded with them, and to be honest I think everyone who has read it has bonded with them. Everyone has been in one of their situations or has that one friend with that personality. It was just so - relatable. It was a good read. And the story behind Evan - that was great, well not for Evan but it was good conflict. This was a wonderful write. And like Some of the friends here, Shane for instance, starting out you look at him in one light, and not long after, your wondering in parts of the book hmm... where is Shane? Why because you bonded with him. You bond with everyone and it just give that feel that your there. This book is unpredictable and it keeps you on your fictional toes. That is why I have finally come to a descition about the rating. I have decided that it dosnt exactly reach my standards for a Ten, However - considering the dialogue, the grammar, the plot and the amazing climax. Im giving it, on the Fight or Flight scale.....  a 8.4.  It was written by a great author. Everyone give her a round of applause and read it for yourselves. Who knows, maybe it will be your wattpad love.  ;)

 

 

Tittle: My Wattpad Love

Genre: Teen Fiction, Watty Awards 2012

Okay to read rating PG-13

Wattpad Author: cool_lady 19

Fight or Flight Scale: 8.4

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Alright that just about wraps things up today. I just wanted to say, if you havnt already checked out wattpad, then go do so! Its awesome guys and besides, theres a key word to its stories they are Free.  Yes let me say that again, UH HEM, They stories on wattpad are free. A membership is free. Sooo- there you have it. Go take a look. Pic a story and prepare to be addicted. XD you guys are awesome. Love ya. Good night.

 

Happily yours,

Midnight





Review #10 & 11

Wow you guys, I haven't written in so long :O I cant believe life had me this busy!!! I love writing here with you guys. Okay so .... I'm doing two reviews to day!! dose that make up for my leave of absence?? One of them is sort of a bribe... She hasn't finished yet...  AND I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!! but anyway... the other is an amazing story. I really didn't think I would like it but then I got hooked on it and actually its unbelievably original.... Alright lets get started shall we?
 
p.s incase you do not notice they both have something in common today.
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Pregnant With My Mate's Baby, Too Bad I was Rejected

 

Pregnant With My Mates' baby To Bad I Was Rejected
by, CriesOfStar

    Every one who reads Fight or Flight knows that I do not like doing reviews on stories that have yet to be completed. Why? Because it could be good right now, I could give it a wonderful rating then it would all go down hill and it would no longer be accurate. However. This is an amazing story so far. I'm anxious to see what happens next and I really enjoy this story. The author CriesOfStar has a real gift for drama, she is a good writer. Even though she's young (sorta really young) shes still talented.
   
            "Star Smith was your smart, witty, anti-parting, type of girl. She enjoyed long walks in the forest and playing COD (Call Of Duty) with the boys in her pack. She was a tom boy who was friends with a girl who was the total opposite of her, Stacy.

Stacy being the Party Girly girl she was dragged Star to a 21 and up party for the celebration of there Alpha's upcoming party and things get a bit too wild when She meets bad boy Alpha Luke.

Pregnant, scared, and ashamed of her actions. Star leaves her small town isolation only to come back later with a small, but cute gift..... "


       Well this has -so far- a cute plot. It really dose. There is a lot of Drama. I love the characters. I seriously do. There is great conflict and the right amount of flare. It needs some work though im not going to lie, its got a couple rough edges. But I really do love the characters and as for the current and last chapter written so far. WOW. yea I hope that works out. this is a great read though. And I encourage everyone to start reading it and to encourage the author CriesOfStar to not give up and keep it up. shes' gifted, she is. with a little work she could very well be a published author. She really could.  And as for this stories rating... well...  You can tell it has had effort put into it. It really dose have a nice plot. Nice consistency with the characters.The title is a mouthful, but it just draws you in. Good story in all really, Except it isn't finished yet, and parts of it is a little unpredictable, with short chapters, however it is a FICTION novel. I give Pregnant With My Mate's Baby, Too Bad I was Rejected a six. So to be honest this is a wonderful review it is receiving. Especially since its not 6 out of 10 is nothing to sneeze at. Especially since no one has really ever gotten a ten here. Still waiting for that one story to blow me away. Who knows this isn't finished yet its currently has only 13 chapters, The review could change. But for now...

Tittle: Pregnant with My Mate's baby, Too Bad I Was Rejected

Genre: Teen Fiction, Werewolf

Okay to Read Rating: PG-13

Wattpad Author:  CriesOfStar

Fight or Flight Scale: 6

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My Muted Mate

 

 

My Muted Mate

By, Maroon1479

 



 

Alright lets get strait down to buissness. I better keep this short and sweet because if I don't imma give it away. This was fantastic. It was Im going to rate this right now and tell why in a minute. Its an 8. This is a perfect example of merging two worlds. Two so different worlds and writing them in such a way as to bringing normalness to the senses.

"RUSSO'S BOOK ONE!

Abigail has a secret; her mother an alcoholic and her father beats her. For the cost, her baby brother wont get beat like she does if she does whatever her father say. Either it's to cook, clean, steal, do horrible in school, or not talking.

Abigail doesn’t have any friend and she doesn’t talk. Not because she can’t, but because she’s not aloud. She can’t speak a word about what happens at home and really, she doesn’t want to talk. She doesn’t want to get close to anyone because she scared for them.

Abigail had to move because her father lost his job and the only work he can find is out of town. He doesn’t like to stay in the same town after loosing a job. He finds it humiliating.

On Abigail first day at a new school, a certain boy seems to be interested in her. Abigail doesn’t know why since they’re nothing about her that’s interesting about her.

Scott was like every other guy—aside from being a werewolf. His whole family are werewolves. He feels so out of place though because most of his family members are already mated at the age of fourteen, but he’s sixteen and mate-less.

Scott is popular. He’s a good boy; he gets straight A’s, plays for football, loved by everyone, care-free, and loving.

When new girl, Abigail show up, he’s wonder struck. He knew he found her since he has felt something he never felt before with a girl before.

But when she doesn’t talk to him, he’s worried she might be deaf, muted, or worse—not like him. "


This story is not as cheesy as it sounds its amazing. I was shocked when I read this and it just kept things straight. I love Abby. I do shes such a strong character and Scott just keeps her on her toes & vice verca. Great way to just keep the world of fiction in balance this was an amazing story. great grammar. great diction. Wonderful characters, the plot is -wow. It just really struck me as amazing. It did. I'm giving this story an 8 and and I sugest it to anyone who loves this stuff. Not to mention the great stand it has against domestic violence. This is great it truly is. And I am really taking off my hat to the author.

Tittle: My Muted Mate

Genre: Werewolf

Okay to Read Rating: PG-13

Wattpad Author:  Maroon1479

Fight or Flight Scale: 8

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Alright that wraps those up you guys. They are both truly amazing I encourage you to read both of them. remember this is my opinion. You guys be your own judges. Okay then what am I forgetting...

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OOOH yea!! Take flight series... My work is well... OTOSAC is almost finished. I wanted to update on here before I completely tied up those loose ends.... its coming along. Just reminding you guys. LOVE YA!!

If you would like your story reviewed let me know, seriously, I love this. you know how to reach me : ) .

 

Thoughtfully yours,

Midnight.

 

 

"Are you Brave enough to face the scale?" They were.

 

 

not forgotten

alright u guys dont think ive forrgotten u all but these have been somw tpugh months but il  gget right to it all qhen i get the chance im reading love is silent right now and a feww others so in a couple days ill get all of it done. tuesday i leave for NYC and wont be back till late sunday night but i woll yet some rwading done while im there. tgen when i gt back ill poat thnz ro hose of u who still check.

Review #9

Okay guys :) sorry i havnt gotten the chance to post sooner. : / but hey im postin now arnt i? Okay well the review for today is for a young lady who has been waiting patiently for her review, and i have been meaning to get this up. Alright well here it is, you guys check her out:

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A New Life - Watty Awards 2012 - Setting2012

A New Life
By Ladymess



 Wonderful. Really and its so sweet, its really is good. I enjoyed reading it. Its.. i dunno its just good. its exciting and sweet, and suspencefull (pretend thats a word). I didnt get to read it all at once like i would of liked but i enjoyed it.

 

"My Grandma used to tell me of a land. A land where there were birds and trees. A land where the sky was blue and the sun shone golden in the sky. She told me of green rolling hills and beautiful colourful flowers. She told me of the cities too, with buildings so tall they scraped the sky. She told me of the rain and how it would splash down on the land and make everything smell new and fresh.
But she also told me of the war.

The cold war.

Lilly lives in a desolate world, underground safe from the toxic world above her. But she isn't safe from what lurks in the caves. No one is. But when there's a glimmer of hope and a chance for a happily ever after, will she have what it takes to save herself, her love and possibly the whole human race?"

 

      Well even though im not completely sure of whats up with the ending... (and im not gonna spoil it for you guys) But im pretty sure i figured it out. and if i did thats a sweet ending. Well sorta... Poor Robin (oops) anyways I loved the characters, absolutely fell in love with Robin and Lilly {okay i'll admit it, what i ment was i liked lilly and i fictionally fell in love with Robin XD}. Ladymess has a way with words, shes a tallented writer, and it shows through in A New Life  And Although the diction coulda been more... creative XD the rest was pretty great. i highly sugest you guys check it out! Okay now enough suspence... i give this story a ... wait for it.... hold on.... almost....... HA!! hah just kidding, anyways i give this wattpad book a SEVEN POINT FIVE on the Fight or Flight scale!! WHHOOO!! (everyone applaude). again this is up for the watty awards yall!! so read it, check them out and VOTE VOTE VOTE!! XD

 

Tittle: A New Life

Genre: Watty Awards 2012, Mystery

Okay to Read Rating: PG-13

Wattpad Author:  ladymess

Fight or Flight Scale: 7.5

 

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Well wish i coulda got that to ya sooner yall. Alright ONOSAC update*** i will refrain from posting untill further notice, thank you. (not on here just on my story). ANd.... um well yea XD haha okay well if you would like your story reviewed let me know, you know how to reach me : ) .

 

Thoughtfully yours,

Midnight.

 

 

"Are you Brave enough to face the scale?" She was.









Review #8 (picked the number at random.)

OKay good morning blogers,
i am all over the place today and i would like to get this done so lets get right down to buissness. First of all i am going to apologize strait away. Sorry i havnt been on as much as i would like, sorry about my wack job schedule and i am sorry that i am about to give what will have to pass as this months review. and i am also sorry that im probbably going to have to space these out a little. And i would like to thank ALL of you for being so wonderfull, reading this and being so patient with a crazy person like ME XD okay anywasy down to buissness....


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Rules Were Made to be Broken {Watty Awards 2012}

Rules were made to be broken
by The Great Dance

          Okay well RWMTBB (its shorter to type!!) is a really great storry and i wish i didnt have to put it off and pick it up and put it off and pick it up again. I wish i could of read it with less brakes, but this really was awsome, it was exciting and it had me hooked after i read the description right away. The prologue continued to draw you and the climax was wow. um haha it really is awosme so .. read it! XD

             "This time, they're breaking all the rules.

After a destructive war leaves Eva prisoner for four long years, will freedom really save her or tear her apart? Rescued from her prison by a long lost friend, she must try to rebuild the life she lost. But unwillingly drawn into a battle she left years ago, she must fight to regain the freedom she never truly had.

Love isn't meant to be easy, but for Eva, it may just prove deadly."

          
              Okay well even though she left me on a cliff hanger! ugh cliff hangers... well this is still a great story and there is promise of a second one so thats a good thing... Alright down to buissness. This story was not the original one i was planning to review but its amazing and gifted author TheGreatDance has entered it into the 2012 watty awards. THIS IS THE WATTY AWARDS PEOPLE! WE GOTTA KNOW WHO YOU THING DESERVES TO WIN!! SO READ IT!!! READ! okay now that i got that off my chest, like i was saying...  shes awsome, and i think she has a good chance on winning. :) so please at least check it out. check them all out, but check hers first. NOW, the moment we've all been waiting for.... On the fight of flight scale i give this story a..... Seven. yup you heard me, she got a seven. it was that wonderful. XD

Title:  Rules Were Made to be Broken
Genre: Science Fiction, Wattpad awards 2012
Okay to read rating: PG-13    
Wattpad Author: TheGreatDance
Rate on the Fight or Flight scale: 7

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                Okay you guys. thats all i have time for for today. but really its wonderful. have a nice day and enjoy your readings. Dont forget to read Rules made to be broken, really its great and you can tell that the author was proud of it and has worked hard.
               Thank you for your time, luv yall all. hope to post soon. you know how to get ahold of me

-Midnight.

Wattpad Reviews: Imma start numbering these...

Hey yall,
    
     Okay well, sorry its taken me so long to only get to one review you guys. Im sorry, but ive been busy, adn some family stuff came up. and its just been crazy. Anyway here you go:

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Shattered.

              

                       wow. I loved this, it was like i could do nothing else, see nothing else while i was reading it. The forms in wich it was written is amazin. I bet it took some time to get it that way too. Even though i dont like reviewing poetry, (wich i assure you shares o many elements with this.) it was indeed also a story, and the author has some real talent. It was a story, and a good one at that. The perspectives of a few crazy people... wow. thats awsome, i mean i guess im a sucker for asylummn storys but still. I loved the form, i loved the story line, the syntax, the diction (the word choice was well thoought out), The whole tone was great. However, the different point of views got kinda confusing often. And the fact that everone seemed to love the doctor... eery vibe, XD such malevoilent characters.
               " They had a word for me. They had many.
Crazy.
But here, in this building, it was called something different.
In this asylum, I was nothing.
A number - 33857.
A scream - one of the hundred lingering in the air.
A schizophrenic.

A mental asylum. A patient. A story, told through several eyes...
"Some demons never die..."


You cannot run from the mirror, even if it is shattered. Deafness is a distant dream, all she heard is screams. She will finish them all, one by one. Until nothing remains, not even the fragments of the mirror "

                            Okay well i couldnt pull away from this while i was reading it. but i had to stop for some reason, and when i tried to pick it back up... i couldnt. i just couldnt do it. it was good as long as i was reading it imediatly but... i couldnt pick it back up.And i think that is an important quality to have. UM... wow well the author gunsandguitars is a verry tallented author and i am impressed. I'm getting right to the point: on the FIGHT OR FLIGHT scale, its a seven.

                   

 

Tittle: Shattered

Genre: Short story, thriller

Okay to read Rating: PG-13

Wattpad Author: gunsandguitars

Rate on the Fight or Flight Scale: 7

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I am doing the best i can alright? I hope thats understood. now on the count that i couldnt get a whole storry read i apologize i will work on that. So if you guys have suggestions or would like to enter ur (perferably finished) story i thank you and i will try to get that done.

-LadyMidnightSun

p.s. FLight... wow you guys if you like flight Im working on getting its sequal in tact. so bare with me.

 



Chyna Express: Flight by Ladymidnightsun XD

Chyna Express: Flight by Ladymidnightsun: Flight by Ladymidnightsun Alright! Haven't posted in the longest time. But still know the ropes. Only problem is going to not want to us...


Oh my goodness!!! you guys okay first of all this is "Fight or Flight" thi would be the Flight part Oh gosh, im soo... wow gratitude going out to my amazing fan, seriously she has just been so suportive and stuff... wow... GingeyAsian, shes amazing, this is her review thing i supose but ... wow READ THIS CLICK THE LINK, such an amazing person, wonderfull. She had her own opinion to share about flight and im just... astonished. really oh my god this is great, wow. XD i was hapy any way from my day but now... now im GLOWING, oh gosh. YOU GUYS GO FAN HER XD VOTE FOR ON OF HER AWSOME WORKS, READ HER REVIEW TOO, SERIOUSLY C(: DO SOMTHING!! oh gosh im... wow. words cant describe, it.